this poem really flows but maybe take the from the second line its an air word
i dont understand what you are talking about. An orange bird maybe?Make that a bit more clear maybesleep takes away from death sumtin like eternal rest would be better
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this poem really flows but maybe take the from the second line its an air word
i dont understand what you are talking about. An orange bird maybe?
Make that a bit more clear maybe
sleep takes away from death
sumtin like eternal rest would be better
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