Great poem!!two things...you might want to add a little more to the first two lines like My Teacher's name is Luke,He Likes to think he's a Duke.Although it is good both waysAlso in the third line he'll kick your butt (not but)Fourth line is great!
thank you for the comment but I think I will not change my first two lines because I like them shot and too the point it also flows betterThanksAustin
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Great poem!!
two things...
you might want to add a little more to the first two lines like
My Teacher's name is Luke,
He Likes to think he's a Duke.
Although it is good both ways
Also in the third line he'll kick your butt (not but)
Fourth line is great!
thank you for the comment but I think I will not change my first two lines because I like them shot and too the point it also flows better
Thanks
Austin
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