Sterling Hall is the school I go to My poetry anthology is not due Mr. Coles is wacked in the head If he thinks I'm climbling out of bed To have a poetry break through
Another great poem! not alot to fix.. line 3 you could maybe choose another word for wacked. somthing that flows better... line 4 im assuming you mean climbing out of bed?? good poem!!
WOW! great poem as usual but if i have to comment on a couple things it would be that i think you mispelled something you write bet instead of bed? Not sure if tats what it is supposed to be? I really liked the humar is this poem one more thing i would comment on is i dont really understand the last line i understand Mr.Coles says trust your reader but i dont really understand...you should make it more clean cut..GREAT POEM
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Another great poem!
not alot to fix..
line 3 you could maybe choose another word for wacked. somthing that flows better...
line 4 im assuming you mean climbing out of bed??
good poem!!
WOW!
great poem as usual
but if i have to comment on a couple things it would be that i think you mispelled something you write bet instead of bed? Not sure if tats what it is supposed to be? I really liked the humar is this poem one more thing i would comment on is i dont really understand the last line i understand Mr.Coles says trust your reader but i dont really understand...you should make it more clean cut..GREAT POEM
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