Tuesday, October 23, 2007

Box of Imagination

Box of Imagination

This box
Holds the universe
It has unlimited intelligence
And you control it

This box sits in a room
It lets you do anything
Ride waves
Fly through the sky
Meet aliens
Defeat your enemies
Conquer the earth
Or maybe even the galaxy
You hold all this power at your fingertips
Will you use it for good purpose
Or for destruction
Will you stand alone
Or leading others
Everything is your choice

It calls out to you
It loves being in these different worlds
It will fill your head with great memories
Will you obey the call

Play as long as you want
Nothing can take away the magic of the box
Just remember you are your own person
Not an imagined character
You will always return to your world

Imagination can take you anywhere
Even that made by another’s mind



Austin

1 comment:

Mac Wilder said...

i really like your poem but in the fist line you could say this box holds everything then the next line could be, and holds the universe and everything you can see. i think this will give it a bit more and tells the reader what kind of things this box can hold. so if you want you may want to fix it aroound or just maybe want to think of some different word to put in there that can flow well. in the first line of the second paragraph where it says this box sits in a room. you should say what type of room. is it a cold room, empty room or it could be your bed room. so i really like your poems and ceep it up. i sujest to put a bit more description in some of your line when you are talking about the main object but then you dn't want to much were it becomes a fact. good job.